Friday, 27 January 2012

Feedback on Evaluation Task 2

This is a proficient task which has been completed.  I do feel that the last two slides which need to be addressing the question more closely - offer evidence to support your arguments.
Also theory is loosely formulated with your response - ie Richard Dyer or a discussion of Kotler's marketing mix.
You have branded the act well , but fail to communicate this to the audience and across your campaign.
Finally you do need to sustain the analysis by linking your production to the theory used.

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